She reads my pages standing up, which I take as a small cruelty. The radiator ticks. Outside, the wet street is doing its thing without us. I sit on the low couch by the window because that is what she gestured to when I came in, and I am, apparently, the kind of person who still does what is gestured to.
The office is hers. The plants are hers. The lamp is hers. The pages were mine until I handed them over, and now they are a third thing in the room. She turns one. Her thumb makes a small sound against the paper that I will think about later, in the dark, alone.
She is wearing a navy sweater I have seen before, the cuffs pushed up. She has the kind of forearms that suggest she lifts the world a little for a living. Editor, mentor, reader, witness. The vocabulary keeps slipping. I have known her for two years. I have known her, in this register, for about forty minutes.
"This sentence," she says, and reads it back to me.
It's mine and it isn't. In her mouth it has a heat I did not put there. I feel my face do something I cannot undo. She notices, of course. She notices everything; it is the basis of the job and, I have begun to suspect, of the rest of her life.
"It's working," she says.
"Is it."
"It's working on me."
That is the trouble with talking to writers. We hear the preposition and not the verb. She turns the page. She does not sit. I drink water from the glass she poured me because doing something with my hands is the only available prayer.
There is a passage on page seven I would now give anything to retract. I wrote it three weeks ago in a kitchen at two in the morning, thinking of no one, thinking of her, thinking of no one. When she reaches it, I know, because the room narrows. She doesn't look up. She reads it twice. I can tell by the way the silence has weight, then more weight.
"Did this happen," she says.
"No."
"But you know how it would."
"I'm a writer."
"That's not an answer."
It isn't. We let it not be. She crosses to the desk and sets the manuscript down with both hands, the way you set down something you might want to come back to. Then she turns and leans against the desk and looks at me, and I understand that the appointment has ended and something else has begun without either of us announcing it.
The rule of her office, unspoken until now, was that she stood and I sat. She is still standing. I am still sitting. The geometry has held. But she is closer than she was, and I can see the small chain at her collarbone, and I can hear my own breath find a new rhythm and refuse to leave it.
"Stand up," she says, quietly.
I stand. There is a foot of air between us, maybe less. The lamp is behind her so her face is partly dark. The radiator ticks. I can smell the bergamot of whatever she put on her wrists this morning, and under that the warmer thing that is just her, that I have caught before in elevators and pretended not to.
She does not touch me. She looks at my mouth and then at my eyes and then, deliberately, away, at the rain on the window, as if she is taking a small reading of the weather inside herself. I have read enough of her marginalia to know she is editing. She is cutting a line. She is keeping a line.
"I'm going to send you notes," she says. "Tonight. By email. The notes will be about the manuscript."
"Okay."
"Read them carefully."
"I will."
"Some of them," she says, "will be about the manuscript."
The rest of the sentence she leaves on the desk with my pages. I feel it go into me anyway, in the place where her voice has been making a small home for two years. She steps back. The foot of air becomes two. The radiator ticks. I am not sure which of us is the reader now and which the text, and I think this is the answer she wanted me to arrive at on my own.
She walks me to the door because she walks everyone to the door. At the threshold she puts her hand, briefly, very lightly, at the small of my back, the way a hostess might, the way no hostess ever has. It is the only thing she has touched of me in this room, and it stays there long after I am on the stairs, long after I am on the wet street doing its thing with me in it, finally, after all.